Thursday, October 29, 2009

Unseen Commentary

Three black figures appear on the tinted grey door of the National Bank. The three figures belong to three men who dressed very well. They wore black tuxedos with fine delicate horizontal grey stripes. One of them was tall and his hair was so silky and naturally pulled back that by just looking at it, it made you want to run your fingers through it. The other man wore a bowler hat and his posture was very straight and elegant, you could sense a firm and rigid body under his tux and red tie. The last man who was in the centre made the other two men look like his entourage, his presence made you assume that he was successful in business and overruled a lot of people. He smelt of aftershave and tobacco with a hint of city latte. The three men all wore a black sunglass and carried a large silver metal suitcase.

Banker 1: (to banker 2); they’re here to make a large transfer.
Banker 2: (replies); you can easily tell from their suitcases.

The three men suddenly set their metal suitcases on the entrance floor and opened it. A large Thompson machine gun was pulled out. The tall man with pulled back hair shot the guard while the man with the bowler hat shot the ceiling. The man who looked like the boss shouted, “this is a bank robbery, put your hands in the air!”

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